Comments for il Compendium http://ilcompendium.wordpress.com Poetry and Essays by Fouts Sun, 20 Jul 2008 01:37:44 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=MU Comment on Raking Leaves Revised by Jackie Hilliker http://ilcompendium.wordpress.com/2007/12/13/raking-leaves-revised/#comment-190 Jackie Hilliker Mon, 16 Jun 2008 21:06:34 +0000 http://ilcompendium.wordpress.com/2007/12/13/raking-leaves-revised/#comment-190 Hi. This is Carrie's sister. I just happened to go by and find this. Thank you. This was really nice. I think she would have liked it. Hi. This is Carrie’s sister. I just happened to go by and find this. Thank you. This was really nice. I think she would have liked it.

]]> Comment on To His Lover’s Stomach by cattledog5 http://ilcompendium.wordpress.com/2008/06/08/to-his-lovers-stomach/#comment-189 cattledog5 Fri, 13 Jun 2008 13:55:00 +0000 http://ilcompendium.wordpress.com/2008/06/08/to-his-lovers-stomach/#comment-189 Well, actually that's a bit of artistic liscense. I'm a big wuss, so my hands are fairly soft. Although I do have calluuses on my left hand from playing the guitar, I mostly wanted it to be a difference between the smooth skin of a stomach and the rough skin of a dude's hands. Well, actually that’s a bit of artistic liscense. I’m a big wuss, so my hands are fairly soft. Although I do have calluuses on my left hand from playing the guitar, I mostly wanted it to be a difference between the smooth skin of a stomach and the rough skin of a dude’s hands.

]]> Comment on To His Lover’s Stomach by j mosley http://ilcompendium.wordpress.com/2008/06/08/to-his-lovers-stomach/#comment-188 j mosley Fri, 13 Jun 2008 13:15:23 +0000 http://ilcompendium.wordpress.com/2008/06/08/to-his-lovers-stomach/#comment-188 It is a very lovely poem. I would like to know where the calluses came from It is a very lovely poem. I would like to know where the calluses came from

]]> Comment on To His Lover’s Stomach by damyantig http://ilcompendium.wordpress.com/2008/06/08/to-his-lovers-stomach/#comment-187 damyantig Mon, 09 Jun 2008 03:28:00 +0000 http://ilcompendium.wordpress.com/2008/06/08/to-his-lovers-stomach/#comment-187 :). I like how much it says in such few lines. http://damyantiwrites.wordpress.com :). I like how much it says in such few lines.

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]]> Comment on Time to Start Posting Again by Scot http://ilcompendium.wordpress.com/2008/03/24/time-to-start-posting-again/#comment-85 Scot Thu, 27 Mar 2008 10:59:12 +0000 http://ilcompendium.wordpress.com/?p=140#comment-85 you have taken this ride and made it beautiful--great gentle progression. nice you have taken this ride and made it beautiful–great gentle progression. nice

]]> Comment on A Slight WTF by Scot http://ilcompendium.wordpress.com/2008/03/11/a-slight-wtf/#comment-84 Scot Mon, 24 Mar 2008 23:37:24 +0000 http://ilcompendium.wordpress.com/?p=139#comment-84 so wtf... so wtf…

]]> Comment on Taking the Kids for Pizza by cattledog5 http://ilcompendium.wordpress.com/2008/03/09/taking-the-kids-for-pizza/#comment-83 cattledog5 Mon, 10 Mar 2008 23:53:54 +0000 http://ilcompendium.wordpress.com/2008/03/09/taking-the-kids-for-pizza/#comment-83 Hey thanks for the comments. I felt exactly the same way when I wrote it. It sound ok if you read it out loud with a certain emphasis, but it's a little too much to have that repetition on paper.Thanks again for the comments. Hey thanks for the comments. I felt exactly the same way when I wrote it. It sound ok if you read it out loud with a certain emphasis, but it’s a little too much to have that repetition on paper.Thanks again for the comments.

]]> Comment on Taking the Kids for Pizza by Scot http://ilcompendium.wordpress.com/2008/03/09/taking-the-kids-for-pizza/#comment-82 Scot Mon, 10 Mar 2008 22:54:05 +0000 http://ilcompendium.wordpress.com/2008/03/09/taking-the-kids-for-pizza/#comment-82 Matt I liked this,but the use of "thoughtful and sad" that close together seemed over used--what do you think? Was it intentional? I like the flow of he rest of it. scot Matt
I liked this,but the use of “thoughtful and sad” that close together seemed over used–what do you think? Was it intentional? I like the flow of he rest of it.
scot

]]> Comment on A Rhetoric for Lovers draft I by cattledog5 http://ilcompendium.wordpress.com/2008/02/28/a-rhetoric-for-lovers-draft-i/#comment-79 cattledog5 Mon, 03 Mar 2008 00:44:00 +0000 http://ilcompendium.wordpress.com/2008/02/28/a-rhetoric-for-lovers-draft-i/#comment-79 I think you're probably right. I like the sound of those words, but I don't really like the effect. I think you’re probably right. I like the sound of those words, but I don’t really like the effect.

]]> Comment on A Rhetoric for Lovers draft I by Scot http://ilcompendium.wordpress.com/2008/02/28/a-rhetoric-for-lovers-draft-i/#comment-78 Scot Sun, 02 Mar 2008 12:52:47 +0000 http://ilcompendium.wordpress.com/2008/02/28/a-rhetoric-for-lovers-draft-i/#comment-78 Matt like the poem/voice--many will identify with this--, but I think for most readers the greek? words will trip them. I get why they are there, but not sure they are needed...my first two cents. Matt
like the poem/voice–many will identify with this–, but I think for most readers the greek? words will trip them. I get why they are there, but not sure they are needed…my first two cents.

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