http://ilcompendium.wordpress.com/2008/03/09/taking-the-kids-for-pizza/ Poetry and Essays by Fouts Thu, 21 Aug 2008 07:39:31 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=MU http://ilcompendium.wordpress.com/2008/03/09/taking-the-kids-for-pizza/#comment-83 cattledog5 Mon, 10 Mar 2008 23:53:54 +0000 http://ilcompendium.wordpress.com/2008/03/09/taking-the-kids-for-pizza/#comment-83 Hey thanks for the comments. I felt exactly the same way when I wrote it. It sound ok if you read it out loud with a certain emphasis, but it's a little too much to have that repetition on paper.Thanks again for the comments. Hey thanks for the comments. I felt exactly the same way when I wrote it. It sound ok if you read it out loud with a certain emphasis, but it’s a little too much to have that repetition on paper.Thanks again for the comments.

]]> http://ilcompendium.wordpress.com/2008/03/09/taking-the-kids-for-pizza/#comment-82 Scot Mon, 10 Mar 2008 22:54:05 +0000 http://ilcompendium.wordpress.com/2008/03/09/taking-the-kids-for-pizza/#comment-82 Matt I liked this,but the use of "thoughtful and sad" that close together seemed over used--what do you think? Was it intentional? I like the flow of he rest of it. scot Matt
I liked this,but the use of “thoughtful and sad” that close together seemed over used–what do you think? Was it intentional? I like the flow of he rest of it.
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